Thursday 6 September 2012

Writing arguments

Should we have nude food at school?

I strongly disagree that food should be nude. Just look at it. All this hard work and one piece of litter dropped we all get told off.

You can’t get a whole school of some naughty people and some bad people to come along and not drop litter. It would be unbelievable if that could happen.

How about you look at the children too? They get told off for litter that isn’t even theirs. All the teachers do is tell us children off for dropping litter. Then look at the parents of the children. Every day they have to unwrap the food. It still goes to waste. They just throw it away and it goes to the same place all the rubbish goes to. A big hole.

How about now you look at what the children are eating. It all gets mushed up together in their lunch box. They have to eat a new thing every day. Maybe for Monday a mushed banana with a cookie or orange with some chips. It tastes horrible.

There is that you can save the earth but I believe that we just can’t do it.
So are you convinced now? I bet you are.
Jacob



2 comments:

  1. Great to see you express your opinion. We had a great laugh about the mixtures available for lunches. Love your humour! Love Mum and Dad

    ReplyDelete
  2. That was a very interesting topic Jacob
    Thrilled that you can express your opinion so well, Grandand agrees with you and Nana thinks your writing is very expressive

    ReplyDelete